Who: Hosni Mubarak
Where: in Egypt
What: He is a leader of Egypt for 32 years
When: He left Egypt last Firday
Why: Because they make against revolution to vote
How: They want to be peaceful.. so everyone decide to make a new constitution
"First Amendemt about Egypt"
Hosni Mubarak was the leader of Egypt for 32 years. He left egypt last Firday becuase they against revolution to vote, they want freedom of speech, religion, petition press and assemby. How they make a desicion..? They really want everbody to be peaceful. Hosni Mubarak refuse to listen to them because Hosni Mubarak want those people to vote but everbody refused to vote... Everybody outside the street and yelled. When Hosni left, they dont have any president so they decide to make a new consitution.
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Ms. A.
Thank you,
Ok, Ms. Amy I'll fix it.
Alright I will. :)
Hosni Mubarak was the leader of Egypt for 32 years. He left Egypt last Firday becuase they against revolution to vote, they want Freedom of Speech, Religion, Petition press and Assemby. How they make a desicion? They really want everbody to be peaceful. Hosni Mubarak refuse to listen to them because Hosni Mubarak want those people to vote but everbody refused to vote. Everybody outside the street yelled at Hosni. When Hosni left, they dont have any president so they decide to make their new consitution.
- What the red states mean.?
Red States are slavery and Blue States are Freedom.
The red-states of United States means they refused to Abraham Lincoln because Lincoln wanted everyone to be freedom but the Southern refused to be freedom. They want to stay slavery so they secede the USA and created their own country called "CSA" so when they made their own country. Northern and Southern started to battle in the Fort Summer in South Carolina and became civil war in 1861.
The blue-states of United States mean they support Abraham Lincoln because they like him.
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Abrahma Lincoln
1: Summarize Lincoln's biography. (5 sentences)
2: Describe a conflict in Lincoln's life. (5 sentences)
3: How was Lincoln an important influence on African Americas? (5 sentences)
4: Describe a memorable part of Lincoln's life (5 sentences)
5: Conclusion (What do you think of Lincoln?) (2 sentences)
- ABRAHAM LINCOLN ESSAY!!
Abraham Lincoln's biography was a sad part. He didn't go to school when he was younger because his parents don't have any money to send him to school. They were poor. Lincoln decided to read the book and learned a lots. Because he love to read. Everywhere he go, he always carry the books and read more. He had 4 sons and married his wife named Mary Lincoln. Abraham Lincoln won the Congress. But before he didn't win so he kept on trying his best as he can.
Abraham's Life was going well. Abraham was born February 12, 1809 in Illinois. When he first met Mary, She was rich and Abraham was poor. He lived in Farmer. He used to build the wood for his house to live. Abraham didn't know that Mary was slavery. Her family wont accept to be freedom. And Mary broke up wit him over Douglas. But Mary's family don't want her to marry Lincoln because he is poor. Abraham won two times congress. He has 4 kids, married with Mary Todd. Ever since Abraham died on April 15th, 1865. Somebody shoot him. The reason why somebody shoot him is because Lincoln won the freedom.
Abraham Lincoln was very important influence on African Americans, he did a lot of work and made famous speeches about civil of war and to be freedom. By the January the slaves were became free, they could join the army and also to vote Lincoln. That was the best thing Abraham Lincoln have ever been done helps African Americans. I could be fear to be a slave if a slaves would never to be freedom.
A memorable part of Lincoln's life is he learn how to read & write on his own instead of having a strict teacher. He was not able to go to school because its too late, So he reads a lots of books like a smart kid in the library reading and peaceful everyday. Everywhere he go, he always bring the books to read.
I think Abraham Lincoln is the greatest 16th president. He was very smart, honored and talented man. Abraham Lincoln will always be the best president that everybody want him to be.
Who: Hosni Mubarak
Where: in Egypt
What: He is a leader of Egypt for 32 years
When: He left Egypt last Firday
Why: Because they make against revolution to vote
How: They want to be peaceful.. so everyone decide to make a new constitution
"First Amendemt about Egypt"
Hosni Mubarak was the leader of Egypt for 32 years. He left egypt last Firday becuase they against revolution to vote, they want freedom of speech, religion, petition press and assemby. How they make a desicion..? They really want everbody to be peaceful. Hosni Mubarak refuse to listen to them because Hosni Mubarak want those people to vote but everbody refused to vote... Everybody outside the street and yelled. When Hosni left, they dont have any president so they decide to make a new consitution.
Hi Kenya! Great work.
Suggestions: Make sure you use capital letters.
Check your spelling with an online dictionary.
Refer to a newsmaker by last name, not first name. (First names are for writing about friends.)
Click 'save' every time you write something on your page!
Ms. A.
Thank you,
Ok, Ms. Amy I'll fix it.
Alright I will. :)
Hosni Mubarak was the leader of Egypt for 32 years. He left Egypt last Firday becuase they against revolution to vote, they want Freedom of Speech, Religion, Petition press and Assemby. How they make a desicion? They really want everbody to be peaceful. Hosni Mubarak refuse to listen to them because Hosni Mubarak want those people to vote but everbody refused to vote. Everybody outside the street yelled at Hosni. When Hosni left, they dont have any president so they decide to make their new consitution.
- What the red states mean.?
The red-states of United States means they refused to Abraham Lincoln because Lincoln wanted everyone to be freedom but the Southern refused to be freedom. They want to stay slavery so they secede the USA and created their own country called "CSA" so when they made their own country. Northern and Southern started to battle in the Fort Summer in South Carolina and became civil war in 1861.
The blue-states of United States mean they support Abraham Lincoln because they like him.
___
1: Summarize Lincoln's biography. (5 sentences)
2: Describe a conflict in Lincoln's life. (5 sentences)
3: How was Lincoln an important influence on African Americas? (5 sentences)
4: Describe a memorable part of Lincoln's life (5 sentences)
5: Conclusion (What do you think of Lincoln?) (2 sentences)
- ABRAHAM LINCOLN ESSAY!!
Abraham Lincoln's biography was a sad part. He didn't go to school when he was younger because his parents don't have any money to send him to school. They were poor. Lincoln decided to read the book and learned a lots. Because he love to read. Everywhere he go, he always carry the books and read more. He had 4 sons and married his wife named Mary Lincoln. Abraham Lincoln won the Congress. But before he didn't win so he kept on trying his best as he can.
Abraham's Life was going well. Abraham was born February 12, 1809 in Illinois. When he first met Mary, She was rich and Abraham was poor. He lived in Farmer. He used to build the wood for his house to live. Abraham didn't know that Mary was slavery. Her family wont accept to be freedom. And Mary broke up wit him over Douglas. But Mary's family don't want her to marry Lincoln because he is poor. Abraham won two times congress. He has 4 kids, married with Mary Todd. Ever since Abraham died on April 15th, 1865. Somebody shoot him. The reason why somebody shoot him is because Lincoln won the freedom.
Abraham Lincoln was very important influence on African Americans, he did a lot of work and made famous speeches about civil of war and to be freedom. By the January the slaves were became free, they could join the army and also to vote Lincoln. That was the best thing Abraham Lincoln have ever been done helps African Americans. I could be fear to be a slave if a slaves would never to be freedom.
A memorable part of Lincoln's life is he learn how to read & write on his own instead of having a strict teacher. He was not able to go to school because its too late, So he reads a lots of books like a smart kid in the library reading and peaceful everyday. Everywhere he go, he always bring the books to read.
I think Abraham Lincoln is the greatest 16th president. He was very smart, honored and talented man. Abraham Lincoln will always be the best president that everybody want him to be.